Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Gasp. Sing. Live

As the fire still goes out continuously, dying out on its own self
I shall caress her strings till she sings out in joy..
I may not know her heart's notes or the right chords to pull
but I can create music out of her, like a mother can make a baby smile!
Singing to myself, the winds and the spray of water from the seas,
the sands shall dance in the light and I shall wave with her euphony.
I'll jump out of my soul to dance in the chilling night
looking at the woman playing with the a black body of sculptured curves
giving out ecstatic gasps of delight until she finds the next spot for her pleasure and mine.
I know she'll be lost in thoughts, fingers plucking on their own
while her mind wanders around the dark skies
and the pearl-white moon.. to the stars and her love.
The flames already reflect in her eternally awakened eyes while lips sing
as she falls into a sound oblivion...
while I dance in bliss!


Image from the internet.


  1. OOOHHHH! unbelievably naughty....this poem has layers and layers..i had to read it thrice to make sure i got it of the best examples of erotic verse i have read (disproving the universally held belief that women cannot write erotic)...but i can sense a little bit of tamil-thinking in the sentence structure... (as if translated from tamil in your mind). really enjoyed this one....and i can now see your real calibre.hats off... you rock. Ganesh
    (P.s. i now understand what the diary writing is all about)

  2. good verses ... the opening lines are awesome

  3. @Ganesh Puttu- Haha :D classic example of how a poem can be interpreted in a million ways. And no, I can't think in tamil.. not my literary work in particular. I get the words right only in English!
    I think it's just a tiny bit erotic on a very personal scale. And no no. This is NOT what my diary writing is about! :)Cheers!

    @Mathi- Hi Mathi! :) Thanks a lot!

  4. Wow. This is simply amazing! Ganesh (above) was SO right about the multiple layers. I read it several times too!

  5. The great raisin- Haha :D Thanks! I'm actually loving the various interpretations coming through! :)

  6. haah, it indeed has layers... But the thought, choice of words, situations and everything is fabulous. Looks very versatile!! :)

    Life's like that


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