and the waning of the moon 
in the peaceful assumption of the living 
that some have already passed the test. 
I'd rather you'd failed for the name not called out 
in months together
is now rolling under my tongue and searing in pain.
Oh, I wish you had failed. 
~Hemu
 
 
really good...very deep and poignant
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ritesh.
DeleteVery intriguing! I read and re-read and each time was encountered with different feelings. Simply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you White. :)
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